C: wielderofweapons

Mad cute, indubitably. But, here's that critique you welcome so: I can see the irises shrinking as the eyes close. I believe this is because you shrank the entire eye instead of drawing/pulling the eyelid over the eyeball. I [poorly] illustrated what I meant here rush-.deviantart.com/art/Untit… . Hope you find it constructive, even if it seems to be from an pseudo-dubious source. ^ ^;;